Week #25 – 100WC – Jade

Thinking, thinking, bulsie!

Guys lets play a game of cricket”,I shouted.

Guys? Anyone want to play a game of cricket!”I shouted.

 Everyone looked at each other and gave a little nod.

“ YES’’, they shouted.

So I call it boys vs girls!”,I yelled.

Bring it on” Andrew whispered in my ear.

I grabbed the cricket gear and dragged along beside me.

Okay who starts”,asked Jessy 

We do”,I responded.

So I started with the cricket bat, Andrew bowled the ball and I smacked it a little too hard.

Now you have to go get the ball!”Shouted Andrew.

“…But I didn’t mean to hit it that hard’’,I yelled             

One thought on “Week #25 – 100WC – Jade”

  1. Hello Jade,
    With a strike like the one in your game, the Australian Women’s Cricket Team had better take care in the future. Well done.
    You made good use of the prompt and speech in your story with only a few minor punctuation errors you missed. With your growing skill as a writer, I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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