Special Prompt #5 – Finn

¨You may start the game, the first team out wins. Goodluck¨ alright I got this. What is there? Well there’s a Candy Bar, Two doors that I’m assuming are the exits,  and pitch black darkness up the stairs. Alright so i´ll check the candy bar first. Well there’s a chest I´ll open that now as I start to open ¨creak!¨ There’s nothing well I… ¨rustle¨ ha what was that? ¨rustle¨ there it is again! I turn around only to see darkness. ¨Gulp¨ I squint, I scream, it leaps at me all goes jet black…

One thought on “Special Prompt #5 – Finn”

  1. Kia ora Finn.
    I love the mystery in your story as each thing happens, because you have done that using short and sharp little sentences and phrases. Keep on practising these techniques, and perhaps try to put each new thing on to a new line as well, so it is easier for your audience to read.
    Well done.
    Ms M #100WC

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