100WC – Week #8 – Mia

She stood there, ready for coach Tom to blow the whistle. “Can you blow the whistle?” Bella said.

“Bella…don’t be rude!” Said Tom.

She just ignored him, and waited for the whistle to blow…5 seconds later, (which actually felt like 10 years) the whistle finally blew. “Finally-” Bella started. But she couldn’t finish her sentence because Jack, flipped her upside down, and flung her on her back.

All her breath was knocked out of her. She slowly got back up, exhausted and breathing hard, she simply raised her fists, she aimed her fist at his face….and POW!

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #8 – Mia”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Mia. I loved you text, especially your accurate punctuation. I found your writing engaging. Using different sentence types, of different lengths, made your writing powerful. I am nominating your response for the Special Showcase this week.😊

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