100WC – Week #8 – Kate

“What’s going on, why is there a big crowd” the girl behind me asked.

“Amara and Emma got into a fight, it’s starting to go violent” I tell her.

Turn around to face her , it’s Emma’s little sister Lucy. She looked upset.

Then she asks “is Emma going to be okay?”

I tell her “It will be fine.”

“Or will it?” I say quietly to myself so no one will hear.

Lucy pushes everyone out of the way. She tries to stop the fight but Lucy’s friends pulled her back. Amara punched Emma in the stomach. Exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #8 – Kate”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Kate. Using dialogue was an interesting technique to use. It makes the text seem personal. I know people named Emma and Lucy so I used them as a reference for character traits. Although I don’t condone violence, it did give a strong context for your writing. Remember to edit for punctuation before you publish.😊

  2. Hi Kate. I think you did great 👍. I would’ve liked to know what happened afterwards. You did a great job otherwise. Do you like writing or do you prefer reading?

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