100WC – Week #8 – Joe

Ahhh my head… Huh what? Where am I? What is this place?   Then in the distance, I could see someone. What? Uh hello? Ma´am could you help me? I’m lost. She started to look exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists. “Um excuse me? Hello… You may not know who I am… Yea who are you? I am your NIGHTMARE! Um okay? PREPARE TO MEET YOUR DOOM! How exactly? By doing…ZOMBIES!!! What…OH I SEE NOW! UM I GOTTA DIP CREEPY MAN! HEY…..DONT SAY THAT TO ME! WHO CARES! I’M OUT! Rrrr Brains…BRAINS! Oh quacks man!

4 thoughts on “100WC – Week #8 – Joe”

  1. Hi. I really liked your story. I would’ve liked to know who was acting each lines. Do you like to watch zombie movies/have you watched any? Great job

  2. Hi. I really liked your story. I would’ve liked to know who was acting each lines. Do you like to watch zombie movies/have you watched any? Great job

  3. Hi Joe,

    Oh dear, is it a Zombie woman who is raising her fists? Wow, that would be a nightmare!

    I was a bit confused about who was saying what, but I think that might have been your point ? The character himself was also confused. Am I right?

    My own kids like Zombie stories …. I’ll have to share yours with them. Good job.

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

  4. This is a fantastic story, it is very emotive and compelling and I really enjoyed it.

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