100WC – Week #7 – Samara

It was the day of the production, my face had looked fluffy from all the foundation I put on.

I walked down the concrete path, I arrived at school.  At 11:00 the busses showed up, We hopped on them.  When we arrived I saw all our props, the scooters , the red shoes.

Once it was our turn, we walked around the back, up the stairs and on the stage.  I stare into the crowd, I see my Dad.

We had to line up, then we danced.

If I had to say, it was the best Wizard of Oz play.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #7 – Samara”

  1. I really like this story, and I have heard of the wizard of Oz to. Where you in the play if you were what character are you. Maybe use some verbs.

  2. Samara,
    You had a creative way to incorporate this week’s focus words. Your use of commas helped me read the lists you included fluently. Well done.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
    PS I love the Wizard of Oz!

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