100WC – Week #49 – Joe

Today was the last day of school even though it was not the holidays I got so confused. I asked my teacher why? She said it’s because of covid. I heard my friends talking about it. So when I got home I went on my computer until it was time for bed The next morning I wondered why I did not wake up early. That’s because it’s covid! I was shocked. Then when school came back I said How was lockdown for you? To my friends. They said it was amazing! I didn’t even answer back to them so we just played.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #49 – Joe”

  1. I love the way you explain how confusing lockdown was and how unusual, Joe. The way you use questions in the story is very effective. It makes the sorry move along quickly. The repetition of the phrase ‘that’s because of Covid’ also helps give the feeling that there was no escaping it. I also like the way you end the story too, bringing everything back to normal again.

  2. Although you were obviously a little confused when we began lockdown Joe, it sounds as though you were eventually quite cruisy about it. I think that if I was writing about mine I would use more personal voice – informing your reader about your feelings and emotions around being with your family all day every day, your distance learning, the activities you had with your family …. What do you think.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth

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