100WC – Week #47 – Joe

Today I was going to the WATER park. I was really EXCITED at first but then it got scary. I was wondering if the water would freeze because of how cold it is today. When I got there it was normal but when I got in the water IT STARTED TO GET FROZEN! I got a dum idea though I fought it would break if I threw a RUBBER band at it but it did not do the trick. I tried STRIPED myself but it did not work. I think i’m stuck. HELP ME PLEASE!! I’M STUCK IN A MINI POOL!

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  1. Hello! I’m afraid I can’t stand the cold so hopefully some one else will come to save you from the mini pool. LOL I like how your story developed and how you used the “first person” to show the thinking of your character, “I got the dumb idea…” Exclamation marks also show the panic of your character. Well done.

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