100WC – Week #4 – Maggie

I walk along the gravel path, stones cracking under my feet. I am coming up to the bridge, it’s been a long day. I have never seen the river bed so dry, I thought. It’s a summer evening and I am at my mum’s parents farm. In spring It was a wonderful place to play, but now it’s all dry. You can´t hear the birds chirping, or the water flowing. It is not as much fun as it used to be, it’s depressing. I’m walking up the steps to the house. 

¨Will it always be like this?¨ I ask.

One thought on “100WC – Week #4 – Maggie”

  1. Hello Maggie, this is a wonderful piece of writing. It creates emotion and it provides detail to create interest for the reader. It is also quite a complex piece of writing in your choice of tense and language. Well done.

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