100WC – Week #4 – Kruz

“Time to go!” mum yelled, no screamed.

 “But if we go now we’ll be an hour early” I say “it’s on at 8:00” 

“Listen to your mother”Dad interrupted 

“Uhh, fine” 

At 8:00

“Come on, I don’t want to miss it!” I said pounding with excitement

“I’ve never seen the river bed so dry and where are the people puting the water in???” 

“I don’t know,” said mum, “then we’ll put it in the water, somehow. Or we could find out what’s blocking the water, a dam? Oh well” crumble dam fffwwwwoossshhhhh “hooray! We weren’t late after all.”

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #4 – Kruz”

  1. Hello Kerry,
    This is another well written story from your class showing not only an entry making good use of the prompt but showing skill in punctuation.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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