100WC – Week #4 – Evelyn

Today we are going to a river bed in Hamilton. I was so excited for this day to come. We are also inviting family friends and blow up floaties with us. This was going to be the best day ever! Dad parked the car and we hopped out. It was hot! Luckily we are going for a swim. We all walked down the sandy bank, then Mum freezed. What was happening. I peeked over her shoulder. Oh no. The river has dried up and now we are burning hot. But I have never seen the river bed so dry before! It was cool but it was a problem.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #4 – Evelyn”

  1. Excellent use of this weeks prompt, Evelyn. You built up to it so well in your story. I could feel the excitement growing, and then the disappointment. It was all very well described.

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