100WC – Week #39 – Hannah A

One mysterious day me, my friend Teagan were sitting on my bed. We saw a mysterious box on my cupboard. I just had to see what was inside. Teagan didn’t want me too. When she went to the toilet I took the box and secretly opened it slowly, carefully and there it was.  It was a… camera watching me. I heard her flush so I quickly closed the box and put it up. I acted like nothing happened, Teagan walked in, I was on my phone. Teagan finally said we could open the box, of course I said YES! So we opened it carefully, slowly as soon as we saw the camera I looked at Teagan looked horrified so did I.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #39 – Hannah A”

  1. Hello Hannah A,

    You made good use of the prompt but what a creepy idea you shared in your 121 word story. Well done.
    Seeing a box and opening it to find a camera inside then realising you are being watched…
    Who was watching? Why were they watching? Was it left as a joke by someone in the family? Should you contact the police? You story could go in many directions.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. I think I would have trouble “not looking” too! Your story made me wonder, how did the box end up on your shelf, and from where did it come?

    Keep Writing!

    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100
    IL, USA

  3. Hello Hannah,

    A neatly written piece using this week’s prompt, Hannah. To find an unknown box in one’s room is a bit scary. To find a camera inside, that too watching the onlooker, is even creepier. Good job.
    Keep on writing, Hannah.

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