The orange dog cried slowly and the telephone started to blare. I rushed to pick it up. It stopped. This day could not physically get any harder. I got dressed to go to work. When I got there there were no parking spots. Minutes later, “you’re fired,” he said in a steep, powerful voice. I got up and left in anger, full of rage. I jumped in my car blaring as the engine started to flame up. Furious I grabbed my steering wheel and smashed it onto the long leather floor. Then darkness surrounded me…
Greetings from Australia Darryl. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. It is not easy to construct a coherent text using random words. To get all of the words into your first sentence is quite a feat! Remember to tell your reader who you are talking about before you use a pronoun. (I was able to deduce that the ‘he’ was either your boss or employer.) I can see how much effort you put into careful vocabulary choices. Well done! 😊🌻