100WC – Week #37 – Sheina

BOOMING Music played in her vehicle as she pulled onto the red carpet with soft mist coming from her car. She slowly climbed out of her car with her BLASTING music coming out as she opened the door, the sound of cameras snapping covered the area like a HUGE blanket. She was so glamorous, everything about her amazed the crowd, her hair blew in the wind so smoothly when she flicked her hair back, her furry coat glided along the ground like a paint brush on a clean canvas. But her mysterious mask covered her face as she flicked her head back to me with an evil smile.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #37 – Sheina”

  1. Hi Sheina,

    I thought that this piece was beautifully written- you managed to include many great language techniques, such as similes, onomatopoeia, and other descriptive words that really helped to craft a vivid image in my mind. This work definitely conveys your talent and skill in writing, well done.

    Keep up the good work!
    Anna (Team 100WC)

  2. Sheina,
    Is her evil smile going to do anything to you? I love this piece of writing Its so quality type. So much details I especially like this sentence
    “her furry coat glided along the ground like a paint brush on a clean canvas.”
    Very creative!
    keep writing!
    Mila.

  3. Hello Sheina,
    This week’s prompt just seem so right for your write-up. Or should I say, you are creative enough to mould a story around the prompt. It reads like a few seconds’ of a well-angled video. Great job!

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