100WC – Week #37 – Lucas

“Aw my finger!” As I light a match, “where do I put it?” I ask.  Just as the fireworks does off and I throw it in the open window.

Bang! Bang! Bang! 

How did they not hear that? Then the fire alarm in their house goes off, they scream and  call the fire people – the bell went & we were in trouble. We are in big trouble now. Why did we do that? “Run!” As the fire truck goes past. It drops someone off to talk to us. It was a  police officer.

What are you doing out so late?”

“Nothing!” as we run.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #37 – Lucas”

  1. Hello Lucas!
    I hope your writing was inspired by your imagination and not a recount of a bad deed done! Your use of dialogue really moved the story along and kept my attention from the start to the end. I’m nominating your entry for this week’s showcase-congratulations!
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

  2. Hi Lucas! What a dreadful thing your characters did in your story. Hopefully if this was a real story they would be caught and get into trouble. I liked the way you set up your characters at the beginning of your story, where they were confused and to some extent it seemed like they didn’t really know what they were doing and later I do think they showed some regret. Well done.

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