100WC – Week #37 – Janelle

My mum told me that we would go on a holiday. I said “where are we going though?”. She said “we are going rock climbing”. We packed our bags but I saw a furry animal but it was really tiny. I thought it was a kitty but it wasn’t. It thought I was it’s mother and it said “hello my name is Speedy mama”.  I told him to play some music and act like a vehicle, like a really fast one. And he crashed into my neighbours house. We got in big trouble. I mean I got in big trouble.

 

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #37 – Janelle”

  1. That poor baby animal!! You’ve done a great job this week and have utilised the prompt words to create a fascinating story. Your writing is energetic and capturing, I can’t wait to hear more from you. Keep up the good work.

  2. Hi Janelle,

    Well done for this week’s response to the prompt. You managed to include all the words from the prompt in a smooth and creative manner, and I also enjoyed the way that the events of your story developed- I hope your character and Speedy didn’t cause too much damage to the neighbour’s house though!

    Keep up the good work!
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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