100WC – Week #36 – Emma

We arrived on a very rocky  beach clutching our bags in our arms. We climbed large, sharp rocky cliffs that lead to the battlefield. We were going to fight the Japanese, suddenly the ground behind turned to stone every second soldier turned to statues. I was getting ready to die on the battlefield not like this. I started running, I could see the battlefield in sight and some Japanese soldiers standing with guns and shells ready to fight. They were startled to see hundreds of soldiers running towards them panicking with no guns in our arms. Everything was stone. It was a terrible sight seeing all my mates dying. But it was too late, I turned around stone covered my body turning me to a helpless statue.

One thought on “100WC – Week #36 – Emma”

  1. Kia ora Emma.
    What a scary thing to happen to all of the soldiers! Not to mention the battle which they were all involved in. Your description of the ground and the people progressively turning to stone is well done, especially because you have used some excellent vocabulary such as panicking, helpless and startled. Keep practising your writing!
    Ms M #100WC

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