100WC – Week #35 – William N

I left my house and started to sprint to my dad’s shop and asked a man “which way is the shop?” I panted. 

He asked me, ¨What’s it called?¨ 

I answered ¨Burmester bakery¨ 

He led the directions to me“Go straight, right then left  then straight.”

Then I ran there as fast as I could to get there. When I got there I went to get some food and drinks. Then I said to my dad “Can I go to the playground near the octromatis?” 

“Sure, come back at 4:00 pm” he replied when I got there. I played for 1 hour.

One thought on “100WC – Week #35 – William N”

  1. Hi William,
    Well done for this week’s challenge. I think it’s more like a diary. I particularly love the way you develop your story. I know what’s going on by reading the dialogue between the characters. Keep writing!

    Xuerong Huang (Team 100wc)

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