100WC – Week #35 – William N

Careful” the black swan said to the goose trying to run from the human with a huge scooter.

“Jeez okay…” the goose said, trying to not get caught as he ran for his life. The human was speedy but not as fast as us birds.

“GET OVER HERE YOU DAM  GOOSE!!!” The kid looked so mad I look at the little lake 

“OI SAKU THE LAKE!” I yelled at him while he waddled faster than a laptop could write as he took a turn and jumped in the lake and the boy fell into the lake by a cat called Loki.  I look at Saku in 

belif and the cat looks at me back,

“Oi you swan you should be careful in this town” Loki warn us 

“Okay…” I replied to him I look at the lake.  Carefully, I jumped into the water and Loki and everything was normal.

One thought on “100WC – Week #35 – William N”

  1. Hello William N,
    You have made good use of the prompt words in your fairytale-like story of a goose and swan’s escape from a human. Although a little longer than 105 words for this 100WC, you made good use of speech to draw readers into your story. Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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