100WC – Week #35 – Tobias

I’m walking down the road one day when I hear a noise coming from behind me I turn around and someone falls into my arms I hold them back up and ask ¨Whats wrong?¨.

 They caught their breath and asked ¨´Which way to the shops? It panted¨

 I said ¨Take a right from here and you will see the shops¨.

 ¨Thank you¨ it said and ran off in the shops direction so I carried on walking. 

But when I got home I heard a news report about a robbery at the shops .I thought to myself and said ¨uh oh!¨  

One thought on “100WC – Week #35 – Tobias”

  1. Cool writing Tobias.
    I like how you made the story seem normal, but at the end you helped the robber.
    In the line I said ¨Take a right from here and you will see the shops¨. Could you have made yourself like be more surprised.
    Other than that its amazing.
    -Ezra

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