100WC – Week #35 – Tegan

 I was running as fast as I could and no one caught me. I was in the middle of the desert, no place for a leopard. It was so hot I thought that I was going to die. But then something happened; it was like the world flipped upside down. Then I was in a tomb and I started to run. I was out of breath so I needed to go to the shop so I ran and said which way to the shops? It painted  i need to get water, I am  thirsty and hungry and then silence.

One thought on “100WC – Week #35 – Tegan”

  1. Hi Tegan,

    Good job for this week. This is a piece that demonstrates your writing talent and creativity. Not only did you manage the challenging task of writing from the perspective of an animal, but you also incorporated some good language techniques and descriptions such as similes.

    Well done and keep up the good work!
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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