100WC – Week #35 – Hannah F

I was marching through the desert after being thrown out of that shabby hotel.
I jumped at the noise. Above me, there was a silver object that was smoking, and lights embedded in the object were flashing scarlet. It was breaking down. There was a beam of green light coming out the bottom of the object like a spotlight. In the centre was… something. I couldn’t see clearly, but before I could look closer, it smashed into the sand and the thing was thrown out. I winced. It ran towards me and-
“Which way to the shops?” it panted.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #35 – Hannah F”

  1. Hi Hannah I love your adjectives and descriptive words you used, and I got really excited when when the object escaped and all it said was which way to the shops!! I think You did a good job of setting the scene.

    Great piece of writing Hannah well done!!!!

  2. Hi hannah,
    I like how you were thrown out of the shabby hotel and then marching through the desert.
    It does make me wonder what was the object?
    and why were you thrown out of the shabby hotel in the fist place?
    It was very nail biting till the end.
    You discribed the object very good and I have a picture of the scene in my head.
    GREAT JOB I want to read more stuff from you.

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