100WC – Week #35 – Brae

Hi I’m a dog and my owner is so lazy so on day he going to the supermarket and he was walking to go to get his keys and I jumped on the table and got my leash I sat in front of him He said “yes” I was so HAPPY!!!  He put my leash on and we walked out the door. 

We were on the footpath all the new smells and shapes I was so happy my owners getting some fitness. I was panting from smelling all the new smells I thought ‘which way to the shops?’ it panted.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #35 – Brae”

  1. Really good work with this writing Brae.
    I like the way you used smell as your main sense
    I think you could work on getting it to make more sense as
    when you wrote which way to the shops it panted.
    It didn’t really fir in with what you wrote first.
    But all in all it was an amazing story!

  2. Hello Brae,
    This is a wonderfully creative story where you told a story through the eyes of a dog. Well done.
    Remember to try to use the prompt words. I see your classmate, Cameron, has also added a good comment.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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