100WC – Week #35 – Ben

One day Jake was being a couchpotato playing on his ps4 like a champ. Then Jake went to have lunch. When Jake was eating lunch he saw an ad on tv, “Come down to United video game’s and get a ps5 for free but hurry there are only 10 left.”

A free ps5 yeah. Jake  grabs his keys and races off. He runs as fast as a couchpotato can run. And then crashes into a big monster “‘Which way to the shops?’ it panted. What shop” United video game’s” No way! umm I would but i’m looking for United video game’s ok let’s ask google “yeah man”.   

One thought on “100WC – Week #35 – Ben”

  1. Hi Ben,

    Well done for this week, this was a creative and great way to incorporate the prompt into your writing. In particular, I enjoyed your imagery and description of Jake as a ‘couch potato’, and how you continued this throughout. I also thought that your use of description and dialogue were good too!

    Keep up the good work,
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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