100WC – Week #34 – Sophie

Moo moo where is that coming from “I don’t know”, said Allison. Next minute  the cows started to fly  “I didn’t realise they could fly! Nether.How did thay learn to do that” i don’t know I wonder if they learnt of the birds and the bugs.  Allison said” that would be funny if thay did” 

I know or the bugs sprinkled flying dust on them. “Maggie said that could be what thay did” and then we saw some pigs and thay started to fly away with the cows. Thay went so so so so high thay went so high that we could not see them in the sky . 

One thought on “100WC – Week #34 – Sophie”

  1. Hello Sophie,

    I’ve heard people say pigs might fly but the thought of cows doing it had me thinking of the old family dairy farm. How hard would it be to catch and milk them each day? What a funny idea. Well done.

    I can see you have used speech in your story. This can help readers know the thoughts of your characters. Keep practising writing speech and sharing your creative ideas .

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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