100WC – Week #34 – Leo

Noise erupts the volcano, then lava gots spit out. Then the lava hits my truck which is dragged into the abyss. And my friends call me as they see my truck getting devoured by lava golems, my friend was grabbed and tossed. I ran over and put him in the helicopter that turned up then my other friend was grabbed. But he got in the helicopter so I climbed in and told him to go. “I Didn’t realise they could fly,” said my friend. What do you mean ?.  Then I was engulfed in steam and heat as the glass melted.

One thought on “100WC – Week #34 – Leo”

  1. Hello Leo!
    My favorite line in your entry was “…I was engulfed in steam and heat as the glass melted” as it’s EXACTLY as I imagine would happen if I was caught up in a volcano. One suggestion I have would be to add some onomatopoeia to the volcanic eruption or when the lava hits the truck (BOOM!, CRUNCH!).
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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