100WC – Week #34 – Darryl

 “Doc am i going to be ok?” 

The silence filled the room. 

“I’m afraid I can’t…” 

The silence almost killed me. 

“I can’t replace that,” he said. I heard as I passed out. Dead silence filled up the room. I heard breathing. What’s this? A tulip? I once again lost consciousness .This time I woke up in a deep sleep in the dream. I nibble on some bread. Then everything goes black. The last thing I hear is, “I’m sorry I have failed. There’s nothing we can do.” 

Ding ding ding! 

“Wake up! Doctors today!” It was a dream or was it…

One thought on “100WC – Week #34 – Darryl”

  1. Darryl,
    Your character’s in-and-out of consciousness was holding me on the edge of my seat. You leave me wondering what will happen next.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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