100WC – Week #34 – Cameron

 I watched as the archer drew the the arrow back from the custom made longbow,

Made for war.  The bow was made of straw that had been finley  from the sacred battlefield of the wingless dragons.  I had heard that the dragons  scales shimmered and laughed at you   Now it was time to face the terrible wingless dragons with my friend the friendly archer, the only one to.  We set off on our journey ready for anything unexpected, or so we thought. 

When we arrived there we saw something so unexpected we yelped out with disbelief,I told the friendly archer/Bob, I didn’t realise they could fly!  I yelled at him.

One thought on “100WC – Week #34 – Cameron”

  1. Hi Cameron,

    A very dramatic and creative tale for the prompt this week, well done! I especially enjoyed the way you were able to build and maintain a tone of tension and suspense using the voice of the narrator, as well as through good language techniques such as mixing short and long sentences together and extra descriptive details.

    Keep up the good work,
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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