100WC – Week #33 – William C

” Rapunzal Rapunzal, let down your hair. Rapunzal Rapunzal, you are so fair!”
“ NO!” Rapunzals’ light silky voice went dark and boomy!
“ What happened to your voice, my beautiful lady!”
“ Cough, cough… I’m down with the cold!” The loud voice roared down the tower.
“Rapunzal, what happened to your hair, it’s darker than before.”
“ Just thought I’d try a new look” the prince carried on to believe the princess’ words.
“ YAOW!!” screeched the princess.
“ What’s wrong my princess!”
“ Y-You’re YANKING ON MY HAIR!!” and just like that, he grabbed out an entire kilo of hair!
“OHH!! my lady, please forgive me!”

One thought on “100WC – Week #33 – William C”

  1. Hello William,
    Your entry was a delight to read! Such a great take on the classic Rapunzel tale. 🙂 I especially enjoyed how you used dialogue to tell the story. Well done!
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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