100WC – Week #33 – Jack W

It’s camp day, my worst nightmare, the wolves in the forest it‘s just not for me but I get forced to. I say to myself there’s nothing better than going on camp. Anyway I get to school and hop onto the bus. We start to head off as the lights start to flicker in the bus. We pull into a weird looking drive then two ugly bats flew in front of the bus. It made me so freaked out I sprinted out of the bus and kept running like there was a tornado as I saw a brick standing figure…

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  1. Jack,
    You have set quite a mood with your word choices such as: nightmare, worst, flickered, bats, and tornado. I can feel the narrator’s terror. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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