100WC – Week #33 – Dominika

3 friends and I start walking into a mysterious tower, step after step after step.  Mice leaped with rotten cheese and spiders hissed with fury.  “It’s very cold up here,” my friend whispered.  We’re finally up the top, WHAM…..We wake up tied to a pole our foreheads bruised by a Frying pan?

We see a girl in the corner with the longest hair and had a creepy a cloak on, she looked mad. “Who are you, why did you come here!”

WHAM I was hit again but were are my friends?

“I am Rapunzel the warrior fear me¨

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #33 – Dominika”

  1. Hello Dominika,

    I enjoyed your story based on a classic tale only recently made into a movie called, “Tangled”. Your twist to the story was, rather than Flynn Rider, you and your friends were hit with a frying pan while Rapunzel is a warrior.

    It was a creative idea to draw on the classic tale of Rapunzel and add your own ideas. Well done!

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Wow Dominika that sounded like an Awesome story. I wonder what will happen next? Also when you said ” WHAM I was hit again but were are my friends?” You could do “Where” instead of “Were”.

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