100WC – Week #33 – Brae

I was at the old mermaids house. People said that the mermaid back in the day could transform into a human, her name was Jasmine.  Jasmine didn’t have a husband. She was lonely. One day she found a magic shell that could make her transform but when she did she was so scared.

First she didn’t know how to walk but after an hour she got there she found the house and she said “Wow what is this place a ginormous crown she went inside it was dark she lighted it up then she named her house the big fat crown.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #33 – Brae”

  1. Hi Brae! Hope you’re doing well. I loved reading this story, especially with how it starts off a little sad but ends with a happy ending. The way you vary your sentence lengths helps the writing flow so well. I also like how Jasmine describes the building as a ‘crown’. She seems to be quite the poet! I wonder if the narrator actually met Jasmine or if they are recounting what others have said about her.

    Great work and keep writing!

  2. Dear Brae and Jasmine
    I love It because. It connects to the Ariel story just tiny bit different. well done!
    I reckon It was so Interesting to read.

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