100WC – Week #33 – Ben

In a galaxy far far far away! in woodlandz were the dragons live. There was a boy named Oliver who lived in a stone tower. Oliver was a nice kid and when he was eight years old his parents would let him free. Oliver would study a lot and read. One day Oliver was so bored of studying he wanted to run away that night so he had made a rope with his dad’s socks. Oliver repels out the window and runs off into the bush and… then chickens out because he sees a dragon and runs back home.    

One thought on “100WC – Week #33 – Ben”

  1. Hello Ben,
    I really enjoyed your response to the prompt! The photograph really does inspire feelings and thoughts of magical times. One suggestion I have for your future writing is to try to include more descriptive thinking or dialogue by the character. For example, at the end of your story, Oliver runs back home after seeing the dragon. What was he thinking at the moment? What might he say to himself?
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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