100WC – Week #33 – Harbir

Me and my friends went exploring a tower in the middle of nowhere looking over the ocean. We go in and up the stairs with them cracking every step. We get to the top. We go back down to the basement. We all stop we hear footsteps followed by a loud voice. A large figure appears out of nowhere. We all run in different directions. I go to the top of the tower. one of my friends follows. I see my friend outside. I hear running up stairs. I see the same person. but there’s nowhere to go but down.

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  1. Hi Kerry,

    Yikes, that sounds creepy! Was it a real person, or a ghost?

    You built the suspense well and I could feel the fear. Well done.

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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