100WC – Week #32 – Brooke

I was in my room then the lights started flickering.  his is creepy I go to turn the light of then back on but before I got there was a flash of light then darkness it felt like my life flashed

 before my eyes . I went to tell my mum but she said I was crazy . I said “ you have to believe me Mum.”  

“Whatever you say.”  When I went back to my room there was a trap door. I stood on it and then I went down a slide to this wonderful land . I feel like Alice from Wonderland.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #32 – Brooke”

  1. Dear Brooke
    It is one really spooky story and I really liked that it gave the story a good them,
    The one thing you could fix up though is one the first sentence after the fullstop there was a lower case h but your writing was fantastic,
    Keep writing
    -Allison

  2. Hey Brooke,
    I loved this piece, it was very creative. I would love to have a trapped door In my bedroom.
    Next time try reading your story before publishing.
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!
    Maggie

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