100WC – Week #32 – Ava

I suddenly opened my eyes, I saw a flash of light, then, darkness. I wondered what it was. Was it a monster? I couldn’t see it because the light was off. I reached for the light switch but I couldn’t feel it. All I felt was hands and they weren’t mine. I screamed.

The thing turned the light on and it was my big sister,  who was always trying to scare me. I don’t know why she’s trying to scare me. As soon as the light turned on she said, “raa! Scared you!” 

I said, “why did you do that?” But she doesn’t answer.

4 thoughts on “100WC – Week #32 – Ava”

  1. Hi Kerry,

    I loved your story! It started so scarily and then it had such a believable ending. I think that the big sister would have tried to scare her little sister just because she could! Isn’t that what sisters do to each other?

    Well done,

    Michelle, Team 100wc, Melbourne, Australia

  2. Hey Ava nice piece I really liked it. I’m just wondering what is the big sisters name? Ava this was a nice piece it was really good and I liked it good job 👍

  3. Hey Ava nice piece I really liked it. I’m just wondering what is the big sisters name? Ava this was a nice piece it was really good and I liked it.

  4. Ava,
    I loved how It how you could picture It In your head, It went from a haunting picture from a funny one
    Is your big sister still scaring you?

    Keep up the Good work.

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