100WC – Week #32 – Allison

I was in a haunted house when I heard my sister scream and then my other sister. I went to go see what was going on and then I tripped into a hole and screamed like a baby.     Where could I possibly be going, all of a sudden a flash of light, then, darkness. “THUD” I had landed in a glow worm cave, why was there a glow worm cave under the haunted house? It happened again, it flashed “The glowworms are losing their light” said a voice, It was my sister. “Where is Kate?” I said. She pointed to a skeleton.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #32 – Allison”

  1. Hey Allison,
    I loved this piece. It was scary, interesting and weird. It was a mystery story And I liked that.
    Next time trying adding quotation marks when someone is speaking.
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!

    Maggie

  2. yeah they did
    and Kate is my sister and so is Emma
    So Kinda sad but it ended out quite good
    – Allison

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