“Wakey wakey” Mum said. I woke up the heat was unbearable
Come on! You have school today Nooo!!!
I have to do my maths today!!! To get out of school today I need to use my Secret plan.
My secret plan is to Vomit but with fake vomit so mum will let me stay home. Here goes nothing mumm yes I feel like I need to Vomit. She comes into the room. Plaaaaa i Fake vomit all over the Carpet
Oh no Said mum You shall have to stay home now
Ohhhhhhh I say.
Taylor, I loved your story. One thing that I love about your story is that you found a way to get out of school, no one wants to go to school some days. One thing I suggest for you is to make sure your spelling is correct, you capital all your I’s and add periods. But overall I really liked your story.