100WC – Week #31 – Tania

 “That day was so hot, the heat was unbearable, so I ate five ice blocks but it didn’t cool me dow..”

“Yeah,yeah teach, this story is boring. Can we read another one?”

Angrily,the teacher stared at me and picked out another book.

“Ok,what about cocomelon ” she responded

“NO! That’s for babies.What about the Terminator book like the movie?” I asked.

“NO WAY!”she shouted, “THAT’S FOR ADULTS!”

“Yeah, yeah well what about…” 

“RUMBLE! RUMBLE! RUMBLE! THE TERMINATOR IS HERE” 

“TEACH! WHAT WAS THAT!”

“I…I…I don’t know but it was coming from out of that terminator book”

4 thoughts on “100WC – Week #31 – Tania”

  1. Hi Tania, I enjoyed reading your piece. One thing I loved was your story. It was really nice. Actually, it reminds me of my school. One thing I would recommend in the future would be your spaces after punctuation.

    Good story, Jack, IL

  2. Hello Tania,
    You have made good use of speech in your story but I would have to agree with your teacher, a book for adults isn’t the best choice for class. Your twist at the end suggests the Terminator doesn’t take no for an answer. Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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