100WC – Week #31 – Kian

Walking across a desert… the heat was unbearable, so …

…¨Yes, luke¨ …

“Water! I need water! Ahaahhh it’s been 3 days. How long can it take until we get to a village?”

“With your moaning, at least 2 more days¨

Jack, slap me! I think I’m seeing things. 

¨I see it too! It’s a whole heap of sand, replied jack

“No – it’s a well, or something?” 

Jack falls off his dusty caramel colored camel. Then there’s a “ting!”

“A sewer!” Jack says.

“A what…?”

“A sewer! Right here, see?”


One thought on “100WC – Week #31 – Kian”

  1. HI Kian! I enjoyed reading your piece! One thing I loved was your use of fantasy. I thought it was really funny! Actually, your piece reminded me of a TV show I used to watch. It was a really funny show! One thing I would recommend is using a little more context. Thanks!

    Happy writing, Ryan from illinois.

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