“WHAT’S WRONG WITH THIS IRON!!!” I screamed “THAT’S IT I HATE THIS IRON I’M GONNA THROW IT OUT THE WINDOW!!!”
Walking to the window I threw the iron out – then WHOOSH! BANG!
“Ouch what hit my head?” said a confused stranger.
“Oops” I screeched in horror.
What will happen to me?
I hid under the un-ironed clothes for a very long time until I got hungry.
I felt guilty and looked outside the window. From what I could see there was an ambulance, a fire truck and a police car.
Wait, what? Why is there a fire truck?
Never mind anyways I’m just gonna stay here inside (and eat).
Hi Tania, this is Philip in St. Charles IL USA your piece is amazing and funny. Its starts out as a funny, comedic piece. This makes me think of when I get really angry at something and I just want throw it across the room. One suggestion that I have is maybe work on comma usage.