100WC – Week #30 – Sofia

One day I was walking along a footpath when I saw a grey metal  thing. At first I looked at it .

I thought to myself  this must be an iron or something else. I carefully looked at it again and then I touched it – ow! This is very hot.

”Hey!, did you touch this?”

 “No, why? ” I said.

“Because if you touch it you will have bad luck for the rest of your life.”

Oh No I thought now I will have the worst year of my life.


The next day…

“Morning Sofia”

 “morning mum, did you have a good sleep”

“ yup.”

YAY! today is Taco Tuesday, huh nothing is happening.

Oh well I will have a good  rest of the year then after all.

One thought on “100WC – Week #30 – Sofia”

  1. There is lots of imagination in your story, Sofia. I like the way you contrast the things that did not go well, when you touched the iron and were told it would bring you bad luck, with Taco Tuesday. You story is very clearly in two parts and you have linked them well by using the phrase ‘The next day..’ Your story is clear and easy to follow, and I like the upbeat ending very much.

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