100WC – Week #30 – Preston

 Sneakily a little Monkey  stole an iron and climbed onto the roof of the best building in the world, he let the iron go, then the smash was loud when it touched the ground, the whole world could have heard it, but there was no damage.

He tried again and again but nothing broke. He tried for the 100th time, this time the iron broke like glass.

He left the iron and ran but the police were there and he saw exactly what happened. 

As Well as being terrified his parents also saw what happened. After that he’d learnt his lesson.

One thought on “100WC – Week #30 – Preston”

  1. Hi Preston! I enjoyed reading your story! One thing I loved was your use of the idea. It is a very creative way of telling the story! Your story reminded me of the Iron my grandpa owns. It’s like concrete! Two things I would recommend are checking your spelling and the use of capital letters.

    Happy writing! Ryan from Illinois.

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