100WC – Week #30 – Kian

“The bat with a hat!

Got into a fat  chat about the city zoo and a hullabaloo …”

With a cat who ate a rat.

He  said “there’s hullabaloo at the city zoo!”

So the cat who ate a rat.

 went with the bat who had a hat.

When they reached the zoo where there was a hullabaloo!

The bat with a hat said to the the cat who ate a rat . 

“Wheres the hullabaloo.,? 

It was meant to be at the city zoo.”

Suddenly the cat who ate a rat said to the bat with a hat. 

“Theres the the the hullabaloo !

The lion with a iron escaped from the city zoo with the rest of the hullabaloo!

One thought on “100WC – Week #30 – Kian”

  1. Hi, Kian! I like your story! I appreciate you making a story in the 100WC. I think you made a really good effort overall. I think if you reread to make sure you have a clear beginning, middle, and end your story will be amazing. Great job! -Maren

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