100WC – Week #30 – Janelle

 Brilliantly these people from a long time ago made an Iron.  I know what you might be thinking that “it’s just a normal Iron” but no your wrong, they made a much bigger Iron than just a regular old Iron. This was an Iron that needed to be heated with fire and not with a plug in a wall like the ones we have now.  I also think that it’s too big but maybe it’s way faster than just a normal sized one.  But I would feel a bit bad for people holding it while Ironing over, over, and over!

One thought on “100WC – Week #30 – Janelle”

  1. Hey Janelle! I really liked your story. Something I liked about it was your detail. I could really picture the story in my head. Something I think you could check is your commas and punctuation. Another thing I think you should check is NTSSWTSW. ( No two sentences start with the same word.) Otherwise, I think your story was great.

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