100WC – Week #30 – Jade

 I woke up in the morning feeling pumped as ever before.

I got dressed in such a rush for my friend’s birthday party.

If I am late , she will scream her head off.

 Skipping out the door, something caught my eye.

There was like a curvy triangle thing with a handle lying on our driveway.

Hurry up, we’re gonna be late!

I jumped into the car.

 

Ten minutes later…

I was on a rock climbing wall, that’s right.

While,I was half way up, I realized there was a handle missing off the wall. I wondered where it could’ve been?

One thought on “100WC – Week #30 – Jade”

  1. hi jade! i enjoyed reading your piece!
    one thing i loved was your details, it helped me visualize the scene!
    you made me think of the time i went to a rock wall birthday party!
    something i would recommend was to make sure not to start ALL your sentences with, “I,” if you used more transitions it would make your story better! there was something i had a question about, the picture was an old fashion iron, but you didn’t really let me visualize that it was that and instead it made me think of a door handle, but overall good job!
    happy writing! -gabi in illinois

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