100WC – Week #30 – Brooke

 I was walking through my village and saw a weird  shaped thing that was some sort of metal. 

I touched it and the tile below it, and I started going down. I squinted my eyes. It was really strange. It stopped on the floor. I opened my eyes and realized that it was a secret underground bunker. Staring at the room when we started to go even more underground. 

What seemed to be  like an elevator stopped on another floor. It looked like a bedroom. I plonked my bag on the bed and tried to sleep. AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH silence.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #30 – Brooke”

  1. Hi Brooke, I enjoyed reading your piece! One thing I loved about your piece was your mystery style. It helped to add suspense to the story. Your story reminded me of a movie I was watching yesterday they were trying to go to the first floor but it kept stopping on every floor and the lights were flickering and then they found a storage unit. One thing I would recommend in the future is to explain why they don’t like silence, other than that your story was great also I do understand why you would not add this because of the whole only 100 words. -Skye Saint Charles Illinois U.S

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