100WC – Week #30 – Brae

I saw the cookies on the bench for my sister. I sneaked one into my pocket then I saw MUM I looked so innocent  I said “Mum please don’t ground me”.

 Five minutes later Mum threw me in my room. I was so greedy but it was worth the cookie.  My Mum said if you want to steal cookies you won’t have dinner. 

It started to get dark and suddenly, darkness enveloped the room.  I could hear my tummy rumbling. I was so hungry I was thinking about eating paper.  I heard a sound, it was not my tummy.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #30 – Brae”

  1. Hi Brae. I like the creepy ending to your story! Well done, I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge this week. I can see you’ve paid attention to spelling and punctuation too – great job!

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