100WC – Week #30 – Amelia

I woke up in a cold damp room. It was dark but there was a light it was flickering then it went bang and exploded and suddenly, darkness enveloped the room.

I had a good idea. I said “help anybody help!! I’m trapped in a room help”’then the room caught fire because when the light went bang a spark went on the floor from the light.

There was a wounded bat on the floor. I grabbed the bat then I went close to the fire. It was boiling hot. I held on to the bat and put the oven on fire. I went to the door bang!! It fell on the floor when I got out I took a deep breath of fresh air and yelled out I’m free.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #30 – Amelia”

  1. Wow!! Thank God you got out of that room in time!! I really enjoyed reading your entry, you have taken this weeks prompt and weaved it into a thriller. I would love to know more – I wonder why you were in that room in the first place… Keep up the good work and make sure to re-read your posts to make sure they are the best they can be.

  2. Hi Amelia,
    I’m so happy you got out in time. I love your imagination and how you saved the bat. It does make me wonder why you were in that room in the first place, There was a lot of fire witch made it cool and more nail biting.
    -Dominika

  3. AHHH Dominika you know It was a wooden bat, the one you bat the ball with. Where is the nail biting in the story. Please read your comments before you post.
    -Ezra

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