100WC – Week #3 – Sheina

As I get out of the car police sirens echo in the distance. With bright yellow caution tape wrapped around the entrance of the building, to news reporters flashing cameras. “Ma’am please identify yourself before stepping into the building,” a policeman said in a deep voice, I held out my badge and he let me in. After inspecting the place a big bulging rock caught my eye, “excuse me what’s this?” I ask a policeman, 

“It’s one of the newest pieces of art they have here ma’am!” he replied. I thought abit,

“When did they put the piece in?” I asked him,

“Earlier this week ma’am” he replied again.     

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #3 – Sheina”

  1. Sheina,

    You really hooked me in with that strong opening to your writing.

    It has made me curious to know more about the woman arriving (a detective?), why she was there (a crime?), why the photographers were there, and why she was so interested about the arrival of the art (a theory about the crime?)

    Well done!

    Michelle, Team 100wc
    Melbourne, Australia

  2. Hi, my name is Samuel. I like how you used dialogue in this story. Why were there police officers and caution tape? Is it because someone robbed the museum?

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